People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work?
Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Usually we say that we only work because we need money. It is true because in our society, we cannot live without money. Everything is to buy. However, I can think of three other reasons that prove that this fact is wrong.
Firstly, your work is your passion. In that case, you do not work to earn money but because you enjoy is, but sure enough payment is a more. Works related to art are the example of this fact. In most cases, artists paint because they like it, not because they want to live of it.
Nevertheless, I have contacted that this fact is less true with jobs that you cannot get without studies. So why do people need to work, if it is not for money? I doubt that people wants to be trader for simple pleasure. In my opinion people need to work to survive. What if we were doing nothing of our day? We would only think of our condition and time will go really slow. Working bring a necessary routine to our days. Labour is a great way to distract ourselves. For instance, times seems longer during holidays than during my school days. And this is all the more when I have nothing to do. Having a job is a way to get your mind occupied at something you are supposed to enjoy doing for 8 hours a day. In our example of the trader, he/she gets to do something of her/his day in an atmosphere he/she is attracted.
Finally, working is a way to get more knowledge. Even if someone who stays at home can read and watch TV, I think people learn more at their office. For example, today a lot of people are working in an international context. They gain knowledge by interacting with a large range of persons. And as it is known: Human is a social animal, so we need to meet people and work can be a way to satisfy it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, for example, for instance, i think, in most cases, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22590361446 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26620348936 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7199066872 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.12 100.406767564 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.28 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300393137962 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865521559999 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724896322453 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1960189451 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491587043629 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 11.7677419355 43% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.37 10.9000537634 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 10.247311828 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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