There are various kinds of method to understand the character of a society, the essay claimed the hero and role models as good symbol of the nation can be an exhaustic representaion, it actually narrowed down the way to understand the country.As far as my conern, the main hero is a part of the society's culture,however, the character of the whole nation exists everywhere. I will suggets some point that we can cue in the character and analyze the hero's part which the essay disscussed that I do not totally agree.
Different contries have different cultures. Japanese character is a controversy to people ,especially to chinese. When we were very young，We chinese all had been taught that the janpanese intruded china and masccared people of our nation over 3000000 in Najing ,1937. It had made us very angry with janpanese for years and we will never forget the history. Lots of people, including me, consider the janpanese, especially the emperor,were all very bad as the did such crime to chinese people and do not regret totally. But now when I went to Japan for trip, I found almost every japanese is very polite and humble, no one like beast as I thought before. So If I do not go to tokyo, Yokohoma, Osaka, I won't believe what I saw and experinced. As I concern, we could not understand the character of a society merely by main hero of roles that could make us to make an parochial judgement like lots of chinese people's impresion on Janpanese.
Another reason is the Hero of the socitey respresent part of the main character of a country. Nelson Mandela was very tough president who had lived in jail for decades. With the strong belief that "NEVER NEVER EVER GIVE UP", which inspired millions of people, he went through the tough days and made South Afirca prosper and thrived on his presidency. While we can not just judge the character of South Africa as tough from the hero President Madela, there are so many tribes and white people in South africa, so wen can not make a general dipiction of the character for the country, as my experince in Cape Town was very good for living and people there are all very kind and mild.
The hero is the symbol of the country while every coin has two sides , some hero , on the other hand is not a good ideal of the country which can do harm to the figure to the country, like Stalin, russian president who killed many people disagreed with him, the role also could not be a good character of the society.
In conclusion, I do not agree with the topic toally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, while, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62305986696 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55338452345 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49667405765 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8235161422 60.3974514979 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.3125 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1875 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190427292386 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587416211127 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775752037099 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104723330035 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812142736366 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.