Children are all different, some are more honest, some are better at helping others, and some are very well organized. These decisions are made by the parents telling their children how to behave. If there was only one you could choose, I would choose that helping others is the best. I believe this because of the reasons I will share.
My first reason for choosing helping others over honesty, and being well organized, would be that helping others would benefit the children a lot more in the future. Honesty would not always be helpful, as there are some situations in which you have to lie to protect others. Being well organised is good, but some people do not necessarily need organization to be successful in life. However, helping others could allow you to get a better job. One example is my friend’s father. He was looking for a job, but his friend was in a crisis, and he did not have much money, because of his business. My friend’s father loaned him some money, and even risked himself being homeless just to help his friend! That money was used wisely, and it helped the business start. He got hired and now gets paid well.
Secondly, I believe that helping others can help you get better at being nicer to people. Being nicer to people always has benefits and can get you very good friends. Even if they do not become friends, they will always know you as someone nice and kind. This could help you get a lot more help if you need something. One case of this is when one of my friends did not have money for food. I bought him some food, and when I didn't have money, he bought me. We both helped each other and it had benefit the two of us.
I think that helping people out is good. It can help us with many things including being nicer to people and it could benefit you in the future. Honesty and being organized is good, but they can not help you out as much as being helpful to people. Overall, I think being helpful to people can benefit you a ton and will always help you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to help'.
Suggestion: to help
... share. My first reason for choosing helping others over honesty, and being well org...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ood. I bought him some food, and when I didnt have money, he bought me. We both helpe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41935483871 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18855509051 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451612903226 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8006474963 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4782608696 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1739130435 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86956521739 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20641874424 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072023776949 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583821527215 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138973570707 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399682646136 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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