People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? what should be done to encourage people to protect the environment.
The issue of environmental protection has grown in importance over the past few decades. Although it is generally believed that nature exposed to danger throughout the world, there are a number of damages because of people neglect. This essay will discuss the main reasons for these kinds of behaviors and provide some solutions in which the situation can be improved.
There are two reasons why most people do not pay attention to their surroundings. Firstly, the lack of knowledge about the consequence of destroying nature causes the ecological catastrophe to come. For example, if a person was aware of how the particle pollutant emission harms the biosphere, it would be possible that to use public transportation. Secondly, over-population leads to urban sprawl. As a result, deforestation and logging for building new houses endanger the global biosphere.
Raising awareness and rewarding law-abiding individuals are the keys to motivate people to respect nature. Educating nations through different methods like the media for adult and training children. For instance, broadcasting movies about how to separate out their waste for processing companies. Besides, undoubtedly there are plenty of laws for preserving the environment in every country. Those who follow these rules can be rewarded in order to make these treats as social norms. Using tax incentive can be the preferable choice for them.
In conclusion, the population growth and not enough information seem to be the causes of denying the responsibility of conserving nature. Authorities could consider some measures like educations and prizes can deter the environment exacerbation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an deter the environment exacerbation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54724409449 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05945031345 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669291338583 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.863997268 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146680794946 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422924015723 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441155146806 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843277609798 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403540288528 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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