The information technology era,that people in today.Evidently makes our life quick and easy.One person can contact via computers with others at anytime at any place.But does this makes people happier ? Generally speaking,Happiness depends upon factors such as food ,shelter,and also on a satisfactory job.Moreover,love with family and friends.Whereas, in this modern communication age,the ways for happiness is varies among people.
One argument to put forward is that,with the help of technology, a man can do a plethora of things quickly.Typically people send their integral information through e-mails and also chatting with colleagues and their loved ones online.Furthermore,online-shopping is also quite popular.To be more precise,in this jet-set world ,people have plenty of work to do.Therefore,they have a hectic schedule as well as limited time.Consequently, with the help of technology they can save their time and money. For instance,online shopping sites such as Amazon,Myntra and many others sites related to Banking, Hotels booking,online food delivering and many more offered a huge discount to their customers. So in this way people saved their time and expenses.Consequently,when time and moey is saved it give happiness to a person.
On the other hand, it seems that , Technology isolates the man,which leads to mental ailments such as depression,stress and ofcourse suicide rates are also increasing among the technosavy generation.What this means is,they cannot able to share their personal feelings with others which makes them unhappier.Frequently, lifestyle of a person is changing,it can be seen that talking with whole family in a one room has been replaced by online-chatting.
In compendium,given the aforementioned view points ,it is crystal clear that,Happiness is hard to define.From my perspective,Technology makes the life of people easier which is a positive development. Even so,it would seem that quality of our relationships and modern technology are unrelated. Afterall,it is only a tool which can be handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, even so, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80528052805 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.27721725851 2.80592935109 152% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.997685167 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.444444444 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8888888889 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 48.0 5.01903807615 956% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183412448824 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751630387986 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0187949290953 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107564698682 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204691947508 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.06 50.2224549098 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.01 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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