Our world has underwent tremendous conversion since the previous centuries. It is often argued that people have far more choices than before over the recent years. In my view, I completely agree with that and I believe improvement of technology and the mass media are two of the main reasons for that, which would be explicated in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, the prevalence of advertisements create more choices for human. Over decades before when the mass media was under developed, people could hardly be informed about the information of the latest message or trend. However, it was until the progress of the mass media that human began to get informed on the various information. To demonstrate, in terms of the cellphone, people nowadays are provided more choices according to the massive adverts publicized around the internet and any corner in the city. With different brands, function, and different price of the cellphone information denoting by the adverts, the citizens end up to face more choices. As a result, the advertisements plays an important role in terms of the increasing choices of human beings.
Even more disturbing, though, is that people have more choices compared to before is primarily attributable to the improvement of the technology. For instance, prior to the invention of the airplane, people who are fond of international travel could merely depend on shipping transport. Nevertheless, the tourists could take the airplane to travel further and even with lower budget recently since the development of the aviation technique. Furthermore, the modification of the trains has significantly augmented the choices of domestic transportation. High speed rail is a case in point, which in turn provides another choice of the native people in terms of domestic transportation.
All in all, I am convinced that people are surely given more option owing to the advancement of modern technology and the pervasive mass media.
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 73
- All education, primary, secondary and further education, should be free to all people and paid for by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 67
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Countries（where there is high unemployment）most pupils should be offered only primary education, there is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'undergone'.
Suggestion: undergone
Our world has underwent tremendous conversion since the previou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29617834395 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00959458066 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4817897701 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.866666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933547600956 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294702254711 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283186307074 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057203432726 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210621043355 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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