Agree or disagree?
Successful persons try new things and taking risks, rather than only doing things and what already know how to do well.
Although a lot of people strongly believe that experiencing various things leads to perplexing among a torrent of options, to making individuals lost in continuing their ways, and finally to failing in the way of their goals, it seems to me that such thoughts basically are deep-rooted in person’s minds on account of not having adequate taking risk. Provided that they familiarized with human’s capabilities, they would never dared to compromise themselves like disabilities. The basis of my view point will suggest due to explaining condition of successful persons and describing reasons for not being accentuated for another group on which next paragraphs will elaborate.
To begin with, what separate pioneers from ordinary persons is their taking-risk spirits. For example, imagine a person who experienced a plenty of situations like, being in different communities, taking part in social activities, music clubs, story-telling clubs, and etc., together with changing occupations commonly. Such person either got acquainted with him/her talents, or he/she discovered diverse aspects of her/his personality. Had individuals restricted themselves to just one way, they would never have discovered their genuine talents.
Additionally, coward persons often obey what leaders told them. Having such souls, they always wait for a sign sending by brave persons; stay behind to see what others achieve, then they test it; and jealous when they cannot get the candle of leaders. Such destinies is belong to who do not dare to discover their personalities.
All in all, to put the issue into a nut shell, taking risk and taking caution to the wind both are features of successful persons.
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Provided that they familiarized with human's capabilities,
Provided that they were familiar with human's capabilities,
Such destinies is belong to who do not dare to discover their personalities.
Such destinies belong to those who do not dare to discover their personalities.
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