In the maps given, the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development are shown in clear details.
The first map displays the town at the current state. According to it, the main road crosses the map horrizontally, and it is between two rows of shops. At the north of it, there is a countryside as well as housing at the south of it. At the two ends of the row of shops of the southern side of the main road, two roads are connected to the main road, one at the west of the row of shop leads to a school and the other at the east to a park.
The second map presents the town in the near future. The two roads at the ends of the row of shops at the south of the main road will connect, and the joints will also be connected at the north, forming a dual carriageway. The part of the main road that is in the dual carriage will be for pedestrians only. There will be new housing near the park which will become smaller. The row of shops at the north of the main road which will be for pedestrians only will be replaced with a bus station, a shopping centre, a car park and a new road that will enter into the dual carriageway from the inner east of it. That road will lead into new housing. The shop at the south of the main road will be unchanged.
In conclusion, from the data given, it can be assumed that the small town, Islip, will become more developped after implementing the plan.
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems 56
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ly, and it is between two rows of shops.At the north of it, there is a countryside...
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...t the north, forming a dual carriageway.The part of the main road that is in the du...
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...t the north, forming a dual carriageway.The part of the main road that is in the du...
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... carriage will be for pedestrians only. The park will become smaller, and there wil...
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... and there will be new housing near it. The row of shops at the north of the main r...
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... carriageway from the inner east of it. The road will lead into new housing. The sh...
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...t. The road will lead into new housing. The shop at the south of the main road will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 280.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09285714286 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27823553279 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407142857143 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1163745809 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.181818182 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149330393873 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894841458203 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972424116329 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161513956763 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124926502851 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.94 61.2550243902 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.74 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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