The line graph and the table give information about worldwide water uses by different sectors and water consumed in brazil and cargo in the year 2000.
Overall, it is clear that the global water uses increased generally in every sector. while the agriculture sector consume more amount of water.however, Brazilian consumption of water proportion is higher than that of Congo people.
Regarding the line graph, the agriculture consumption steadily increased in the first fifty years of the mentioned time period. In 1950, it faced a rapid growth in which water usage increased considerably from just over 3,000 km in the end of the time period. Nonetheless, the industrial and domestic sectors were steady in the year between 1900 and 1950 . Then, both sectors experienced a vast increasement in global water consumption until it reached above 1000 km and 400 km respectively.
According to the table in Brazil which is populated by 176 million people, have 26,500 km to irrigate. Hence the water consumption per person reached high as 359m. By country, congo differs form brazil that their population of 5.2 million and have only 100 km to irrigate. Hence, the water consumption were no more then 8m per person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13065326633 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77902410929 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.166206258 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8181818182 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296010749295 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11853002409 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119630336414 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222683922346 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143574870984 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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