The line graph illustrates the proportion of population aged 65 and over in the Japan, Sweden and USA between 1940 to 2040.
Overall, the population range of elderly people increased in each countries over the hundred years from 1940 to 2040, Japan is expected to see the most dramatic changes in the elderly population.
With regards to the percentage of old people in Sweden, It begins at considerably above 5% in the starting period and reached up to 25% in 2040. Likewise, approximately 5% of early aged people were there in Japan in the year 1940, which was the lesser among three countries. But, in the final year it peaked up to more than 25% respectively.
On the other hand, the proportion of old people in USA started under 10% in the starting of the period. Approximately, that was the highest among other countries, which increased by exceeding sweden in 2000 and reached under 25%. Figure fluctuated and USA population was lesser in the Final year.
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. 78
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 73
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.why is this happening and what measures can be tackle this problem. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s the lesser among three countries. But, in the final year it peaked up to more t...
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...pproximately, that was the highest among other countries, which increased by exce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, likewise, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84939759036 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70736724919 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2665172252 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276165792228 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121354678106 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153590315018 0.0843802449381 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204715486353 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174158089366 0.0819641961636 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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