The diagrams below show how chocolate is made and how the price of a chocolate bar is divided up among those involved in the process. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.
The pictures show how chocolate is produced and its price is divided up including the process. Generally, it can be seen from the pictures that there are several special processes which need to be done. Moreover, there are some parts that will get the proportion of chocolate price.
In the process of making chocolate, chocolate is ground so that it becomes cocoa liquor and waste as by-product. Then, cocoa liquor is divided into two different methods. Firstly, cocoa liquor is pressed by machine to be cocoa butter and cocoa powder. The cocoa powder can be used in food industry. Secondly, coco...
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