Your rental accommodation was recently damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord and say:– Explain what caused the damage.– Why do you need them to fix the problem right away?– What needs to be done to fix it?

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Your rental accommodation was recently damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord and say:
– Explain what caused the damage.
– Why do you need them to fix the problem right away?
– What needs to be done to fix it?

Dear Mr. Fredrik,

I am a tanent of your "Excellent Student Complex" of London. I am writing to let you know regarding the damaged water heating system which is out of service since 03 May, 2018.

I tried to contact with your assigned plumber but he turned down the proposal of repairing the system due to involvement of installing a new one as the old one is unrepairable. It will involve a cost of 100 pounds which is beyond his budget. As you know, winter in London suffers us a lot, the water heating system is indispensible for us because from last of this month the temperature will start to fall.

In this circumstance, I would like to request you to release the amount to purchase a new heating system for the convenience of the students who are living in this complex.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely

Jakir

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'May 2018'.
Suggestion: May 2018
...system which is out of service since 03 May, 2018. I tried to contact with your assign...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s out of service since 03 May, 2018. I tried to contact with your assigned plu...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, regarding, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69934640523 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8307068059 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7555063408 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.875 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0668299721235 0.216113520407 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310886923241 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195065941061 0.0603063233224 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0379685278088 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01672901626 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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