In the recent few decades, movies have increased dramatically and we start to ask ourselves if it is worth to watch all the different kind of movies or just the movies that teach us about the real life. Personally, I believe that watching movies for entertainment and relax is worth.
Life is hectic and it is difficult to keep with. Watching movies for joy gives you a way to stop the life a little. A lot of people enjoy seeing a movie that keeps them away from thinking about life. Thus, watching only movies that teach about life is boring. My own experience is a good compelling example. I am a pharmacist and I work for nine hours daily. I have to check every detail in each prescription that I receive and I receive hundreds. Every day after dinner I enjoy watching TV. It keeps my brain off, especially if the movie is attractive and excitement such as fast and furious. These two hours gives me a way to entertain myself avoiding thinking of life.
In addition, all the movies could teach you something. Not only about real life, but also about imagination, science, and culture. For instance, when you go to Netflix there is a different category. The documentary is a big one. There are series about different culture like American Indian. I just learn that they live normally as all the people do. They have reservations across the U.S. they have court and wear normal clothes. Some movies teach us wrong information about the different culture. As you can see, I learned about them because I saw the documentary.
Frankly speaking, it is true that it is better that we watch something that teaches us about real life. However, most movies who teach us about real life are boring. For instance, the bird box that millions of people have watched. Yes, it is a good movie, but there is no action or something that attract you, so you can enjoy watching it. It is a lesson that we thank god that we have eyes. They can make it in five minutes video clip rather than spend a lot of money in a repetitive story.
All in all, I totally disagree with the statement. This is because all the movies are worth to watch for entertainment and avoid this life. Also, you can learn a lot and not only in real life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, frankly, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52357320099 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48597591044 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478908188586 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7035285703 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.7666666667 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4333333333 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412974522646 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105534788877 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970327651695 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247000544362 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377700170613 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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