Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In today`s world, with rapidly changing environment of science and technology, people should be capable to perform a lot of tasks in a short time and they must be professional on their jobs. If they make some regular mistakes, they may lose their jobs since every company needs professional human resources to make profits for them. Although, the ability to work quickly have some advantages, but I think, work slowly and make sure that everything is correct is more valuable than work quickly and risk making mistakes. I would like to put forward some of the most significant reasons to illustrate my standpoint.

First and foremost, working with a good concentration is much better than working quickly without having enough concentration, since with being focused on a job, people can have an extended view over it and their efficiency will increase as well. For instance, if you stay focused on your job entirely and do not finish your work without making sure of its accuracy, your performance will increase, and you will be a successful person in your job. In contrary, if you just work quickly with the risk of making mistakes, you will never gain a deep understanding of your job and cannot progress in future. With deep and slow concentration on everything, we can be more creative and expert in our jobs.

Moreover, performing works quickly and risk making mistakes can increase your stress and put you on pressure. Because you are always worry about your mistakes and maybe blame yourself for the lack of your responsibility on your job. As we all know, living in a stressful atmosphere is not good for humans` health.

Last but not least, if you make some mistakes with rapid-pace of working, you should put some extra times for revise your mistakes. So, it is very time consuming. In my perspective, if you work slowly and make sure that everything is correct, you can minimize wasting of time during the work which is very beneficial for your progress. In other words, time management is a considerable skill which is necessary for every person.

Having considered all the discussion above, I tend to claim that working slowly with making sure of accuracy of the work, has much more benefits than working quickly and making many mistakes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 594, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...tanding of your job and cannot progress in future. With deep and slow concentration on ev...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'worried'.
Suggestion: worried
...you on pressure. Because you are always worry about your mistakes and maybe blame you...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, i think, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95039164491 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73027161333 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498694516971 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.115869611 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416430659235 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14578063417 0.076458572812 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122157865077 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259217545205 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451273896364 0.0645574589148 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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