charitable organization and money
A charitable organization is one of the most important association in the community. This organization tries to reach people who need any type of assistant. Donations either private or personal, however, are the essential supply for them. Some people when they donate prefer to supervise the organization on how they can distribute them. Others, leave this responsibility to charity organization administration. Personally, I believe that if I'm going to donate, Charitable organization department is the one who has great acknowledgment on how to distribute it, There are two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To commence with, the charitable organization has a plan on community needs and how they can distribute it accordingly. most people if they need help, they go to the closest charity organization to address that issue and try to solve it. My personal experience is a compelling example of that. Yemen attacked by neighbors countries four years ago, since then, a plethora of people lose their job and they are always looking for help. For that reason, they went to the charity organization to see if they could find a food supplement or even medications. As a result, this organization started to address people need and announce that list internationally in order to get support from the world. A lot of people started to collect money and they send it to them. In turn, this organization takes this money and they distribute it according to people needs, like some of them need food, some need medication, some need to travel and so on. As you can see, If we insist on the organization to spend this money on goods and other services, we did not achieve the goal of what this organization built for, because we restrict it is goal.
Second, most of this organization located far away from people who support it financially. For example, I live in USA and the organization that I support them with money located in Yemen. So I do not have time to travel to Yemen in order to supervise this organization. even the ban on Yemen prevents any plan to land at any international airport. However, a lot of Yemeni people sending money to the charitable organization and they rely on them on how to distribute this financial aids. This experience taught me that we should rely on any charity organization whatever their location is because it built to help people and most of the administrators are good people.
In sum, for the aforementioned reasons, though may disagree with any charity organization to supervise the methods of distributing aids to people, I prefer that charity organization is only responsible on how they could dispense what they gain from sponsors to people, not because they have their own plan on how they can arrange and spend this financial help, but also most of them located far away from people who support this charity organization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 8.0752688172 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2406.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93032786885 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00502356428 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440573770492 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 775.8 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.5586192946 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.363636364 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291697095612 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109774261655 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897391929787 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208072407777 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798649558961 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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