Write about the following topic:
Many people say it is impossible to achieve a healthy work-life balance these days because they have to work longer hours to afford a modern lifestyle.
Others believe more time could be spent on leisure activities or with family and friends if people managed their free time better.
Discuss both views and say how you think the situation will develop in the future.
In this century, The world has been an competitive place day by day. Not only developing techology, but also increasing human population play an important role in this situation. Due to overpopulation, People should work hard and try doing their best in every aspect of life. Because of all these reasons, professionals can not balance their lives in area which are between work and family. In contrast, Thanks to technological improvements, People has been living cosy and easy lives when it is compared with the past. In my opinion There are lot of solution to make people's life more easier and more comfortable, It can be given an examples that flexible working hours and giving guidance to sufferers such as arranging their times more effective.
First of all, There is a controvertial belief amoung businessmen which working a lot brings more money and happiness in the same time. It can be seen clearly that spending your all time at work could make more money, but with that earnings you can't buy the same time which you spend. I think first action must be changing this issue. For instance, people who are suffering not spend adequate time for their families and leisure activies should get professional help from instructors.
Secondly, Companies which request overtimes from their worker should stop this time schedule, because working long times do not mean getting more efficiency. For example most of companies in this century notice that is wrong application.Furthermore, according to changing working periods show that balanced working life contribute doing better job at work.
In conclusion, Increasing the number of people changes life styles competitively. In my opinion, thanks to booming thechnology and growing science, people can arrange their life periods for their familes and free time activies, as given examples; arranging life time via help and companies applying a flexible work time periods according to performance of employers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... In this century, The world has been an competitive place day by day. Not only ...
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Line 9, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cosy and easy lives when it is compared with the past. In my opinion There are l...
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Line 9, column 583, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...re lot of solution to make peoples life more easier and more comfortable, It can be given a...
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Line 9, column 633, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an example' or simply 'examples'?
Suggestion: an example; examples
...r and more comfortable, It can be given an examples that flexible working hours and giving ...
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Line 11, column 245, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... more money, but with that earnings you cant buy the same time which you spend. I th...
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Line 13, column 171, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
...an getting more efficiency. For example most of companies in this century notice that is wrong ap...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...entury notice that is wrong application.Furthermore, according to changing working periods ...
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Line 15, column 258, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... activies, as given examples; arranging life time via help and companies applying a flexi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23237597911 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81450514929 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574412532637 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7756275548 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.882352941 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5294117647 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391528871705 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118864098815 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980798491166 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166884092286 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110083023565 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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