Some people believe the large shopping malls are replacing local shops which is bad for local economies. What is your opinion?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on whether shopping malls are replacing local shops which is bad for local economies. While some people argue that disadvantages overweigh the advantages of establishing shopping malls, on my point of view shopping malls should be encouraged to be establishe in modern cities. In this essay, I shall discuss factors to strengthen my argument while analyzing both the sides of the argument.
First and foremost, we will lokk into the myraid advantages that a counry can earn through the establishment of mega shopping malls, For example countries like Singapore, Sri Lanka can promote this idea becase these countries are considered as tourism hubs. Shopping malls can creat lucrative number of job opportunities to the workforce. Besides that, people will be able to experience different brands and theycan use it as a recretional purposes because shopping malls consists with shops, cinemas, food courts, spas etc.
On the other hand, shopping malls can make a considerable impact to the local shops, because most of the time tourist prefer to visit shopping malls considering their convinience. For instance, small handicraft industry can be effected since consumers have more selection availability inside shopping malls. Therefore, local shops have to minimize their profit margines in order to be competitive in the market place.
In conclusion, it is recommended to encourage shopping malls, at the same time governments have to take actions to mitigate the risks of small scale entreprenuers. It is beleived, that each business has a seperate niche market to cater, therefore there will be negligible impact on the local businesses in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36397058824 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88707362151 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2783529354 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.636363636 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355152868734 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139822840789 0.0925447433944 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134013947906 0.071462118173 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207858788755 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108889133475 0.0609392437508 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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