A recent study of eighteen rhesus monkeys provides clues as to the effects of birth order on an individual's levels of stimulation. The study showed that in stimulating situations (such as an encounter with an unfamiliar monkey), firstborn infant monkeys produce up to twice as much of the hormone cortisol, which primes the body for increased activity levels, as do their younger siblings. Firstborn humans also produce relatively high levels of cortisol in stimulating situations (such as the return of a parent after an absence). The study also found that during pregnancy, first-time mother monkeys had higher levels of cortisol than did those who had had several offspring.
Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.
The argumet presents some observations to infer that first born monkeys usually have higher level of stimulation hormones than the next siblings. Even though it seems that cause and effect are well related in this argument, some points are missing and probably other explanations could rationalize the observations.
First obeservation is that when older infants see and unfamiliar monkey they tend to secrete more cortisol. Seeing an unfamiliar monkey might have many meanings. For example, if all of the siblings are facing this unfamiliar monkey, it is natural that older siblings incline to protect the younger ones. Perhaps, this could be one reason why first born monkeys produce more cortisol in such situations. In another, it is possible that the unfamiliar monkey is a prospective mate for the first-born and this simply causes the first-born to produce more hormone. Since exprementing on only 18 monkeys is not much, and also there is no information about the attributes of the unfamilair monkey and situations, the conclusion is not persuasive and the mentioned alternatives are all likely to be the reason.
The second inference about generating more hormone when seeing a parent by older sibling is not spported well. It is clear that usually all the siblings get excited to the same extent while visting their parents which has been absent for long. Hence, maybe this difference in cortisol level is due to difference in age. Particulary, it is possible that until some age the amount of this hormone increase as the monkey ages. As a result, younger siblings do not generate more hormone because the proportion is still low in their bodies.
Finally, the discussion about the first time mothers might be flawed. A reasonable explanation could be the circumstances the mother monkey is experiencing during pregnancy. For example, if we examine the hormone levels in a mother monkey that is giving birth two its third infant while the previous two infants have died during pregnancy, it is possible that its hormone levels are even higher than a first time mother. More specifically, the amount of fear or unfamiliraity with the situation could be responsible for secreting more hormone during pregnancy.
All in all, in order to draw more accurate conclusions it is need to have more information about other aspects of all the monkey participating in the experiment. Obviously, many other factors including situtaion of the experiment, mental history of monkeys and age could alter the results drasically. Thus, these evidens are not likely to lead us to a unique explanation for the observations.
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
---|---|---|---|
2013-12-24 | souparnika | 50 | view |
2013-11-25 | alimashreghi87 | 47 | view |
2013-11-08 | piyus | 52 | view |
2013-10-28 | Ly Phuong Thao | 45 | view |
2013-09-28 | smartaquarius10 | 52 | view |
- Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at 67
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting 66
- To serve the housing needs of our students, Buckingham College should build a number of new dormitories. Buckingham's enrollment is growing and, based on current trends, will double over the next 50 years, thus making existing dormitory space inadequate. 77
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position 51
- Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students.Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying.Write a response in which you discuss the exte 82
Sentence: First obeservation is that when older infants see and unfamiliar monkey they tend to secrete more cortisol.
Error: obeservation Suggestion: observation
Sentence: Since exprementing on only 18 monkeys is not much, and also there is no information about the attributes of the unfamilair monkey and situations, the conclusion is not persuasive and the mentioned alternatives are all likely to be the reason.
Error: exprementing Suggestion: experimenting
Error: unfamilair Suggestion: unfamiliar
Sentence: The second inference about generating more hormone when seeing a parent by older sibling is not spported well.
Error: spported Suggestion: sported
Sentence: It is clear that usually all the siblings get excited to the same extent while visting their parents which has been absent for long.
Error: visting Suggestion: visiting
Sentence: More specifically, the amount of fear or unfamiliraity with the situation could be responsible for secreting more hormone during pregnancy.
Error: unfamiliraity Suggestion: unfamiliarity
Sentence: Obviously, many other factors including situtaion of the experiment, mental history of monkeys and age could alter the results drasically.
Error: drasically Suggestion: drastically
Error: situtaion Suggestion: situation
Sentence: Thus, these evidens are not likely to lead us to a unique explanation for the observations.
Error: evidens Suggestion: evident
flaws:
This is a new GRE argument essay topic. You are not asked to find flaws from the statement and there are no logic flaws actually. But 'discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation'.
Read this link:
http://www.testbig.com/question/gre-issue-essay-questions-new-gre-issue…
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: ?
Category: ? Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 424 350
No. of Characters: 2148 1500
No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.538 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.066 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.746 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 161 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 117 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.6 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.65 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.53 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5