It is human nature that one may encounter numerous problems on their daily life. Upon solving them, every individual takes different approaches. Some turn to their parents or seek advice from professionals, while some would prefer personal solutions. No one can solve all the problems by himself/herself, he needs to reach out to someone, and the help from government is just an example.
Admittedly, solving problems by yourself is an effective way to get solutions in many situations and it boosts your own thinking abilities and skills concerning the subject. However, there are some times when the ability of one could not solve the entire problem and it may cause a decline in the overall efficiency, disturbing one’s normal life. Therefore, getting help from the government is more than necessary.
It is certainly not possible for one individual to even attempt solving problems like damaged roads or lack of electricity. In these cases, one either did not have enough energy or enough time to solve them. Take electricity as an example, assume that one has the knowledge about circuits which would support him to understand and fix the wire, he must go through the whole process before he can finally settle the problem, from purchasing new wires to transportation and to decide the arrangements. For an ordinary people, this was hugely unlikely to happen due to the huge cost of time and energy. And this is exactly why government exists-to solve problems using the combined force. Thus, the help from government is necessary.
Besides, no one is perfect, which means when reflecting on a matter, no one can think of all the aspects. Governments can make it up by thinking at a more general level. In economics, monopoly arises when government takes the laissez-faire policy. As monopoly reduces the overall benefit of the society, government often intervenes by either setting the price for the monopoly company or limiting the quantity of output. Similar patterns can apply here when one is trying to solve his/her own problem. Despite he/she may found the best solution available for him/her, they did not take other’s benefits into consideration. Eventually, government will make some changes to enhance the total equality and efficiency. Another fine example of why government help is needed.
To sum up, I firmly believe that government helps are necessary when people solve everyday problems.
- Which one do you think is the most important factor for a student to success at college or university 1 Tutors in university 2 The encouragement from family and friends 3 quality education from high school 82
- People can solve important problems by themselves or by their families thus it is almost not necessary to refer to the government 83
- 1- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 86
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1862244898 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82430910822 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2443393093 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4090909091 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31818181818 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161818774926 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050437564497 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437229963732 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106575621117 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318589328725 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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