Some say that people should continue to work in the same job for a lifetime. Others say they should change jobs at least once during their career.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The vocations people choose to build careers upon vary from one person to another. Equally varied are the opinions people hold about their work and whether it is better to commit themselves to one profession throughout their career or to change their professions several times over the course of their lives. In this essay, it is argued the latter poses more positive points to the individual. This will be proven by looking at how engaging in multiple jobs allows a person to discover their potential and avoid becoming uncreative as a result of boredom due to monotony.
For one, people who diver...
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