The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newton between 1980 and 1996. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This graph illustrates the number o complaint which was a result of noisy from road works, factories, traffic noise, and domestic between 1980 and 1996. This report is given to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown.
It can be seen that this picture shows about the level of complaints against source of noise. Firstly, in 1980 numerous of road work was the highest, it was up to 600 complaints. Even though it decreased steadily with little fluctuation toward end of 1996. By contrast with factories noisy effect which started at 400 point and then it continued to rise slightly until 1986. After that it levelled off in point 700 of complains. In this graph, it also can be seen the similarities between percentage of Domestic and traffic noise.
Interestingly , if we make comparisons from both of them, the result is traffic noise and household have correlation each other. When, they dropped throughout in 1986 to 1988 and in peak in 1996. It means that the departed and amount of Domestic cause more transportation as contributor of noise.
To sum up, there are information about number of complaints in 1980 to 1996 in the city of Newtown.
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