Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Kids do require proper care and must be always under observation during first few years. But also, working parents do have commitment towards their career too. As to the childcare, most of the time, the parental society is divided in their opinions. There is a group of people who believes that besides family members no one else can take proper care of children. Whereas, others puts complete faith into crutches, pre-schools or baby-sitters. In my opinion, I think children under supervision of their family could be properly nurtured rather than elsewhere.
Firstly, supporters of childcare would argue that they provide best services in term of training, staff and various activities. They are trained professionals who have extensive experience in this field. while, this may be true to some extent, but the care provided at these centres are not focused towards particular child. If the child, however, is raised under the supervision of grandparents, they will be completely devoted towards care and nourishment of their grandchildren rather than a group of fifteen to twenty kids. Also, the child develops a bonding with his family at this early stage which is much needed in todays' world.
This brings me to my second point, people often say that sending children to childcare school is good for their social upliftment as they learn to get involved with others. However, I would argue that this skill of being socially involved will anyhow be fostered while going to school or at home also grandparents can take their child to park where he or she could play with other children. Just for the sake of this excuse of making child socially active we shouldn't jeopardize the care and the love they would receive while being with family. Moreover, from their long life experience, grandparent can act as great care takers to ensure proper nourishment and holistic growth of child.
All in all, although, there might be trained professionals who could take care of children but we must accept the fact that there will be significant difference between the care with an intent of business as compared to an intent of love.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, whereas, while, as to, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0395480226 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60594713146 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3630568969 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235432572457 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075283932441 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424991825287 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129868465045 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558976740146 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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