Nowadays the importance of teachers is diminishing due to increased availability of alternative resources to students, to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
Teachers are called the nation builder. Presently, plethora of study resources are available which reduce the importance of tutor. Here, I would like to agree with the statement at larger extent.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, the availability of internet applications reduce the value of teachers. To illustrate, there are numerous application available on internet regarding study which confer distinct methods of study for students. Students can learn innovative methods and ideas for learning. Moreover, online classes also make learning more interesting for students. They can not only attend classes but also share ideas and strategies of learning with international students. Thus, the value of teachers is reducing day by day.
Further emphasising on my point of view. The availability of Electronic gadgets also decrease the presence of teachers. For example, there are pre-installed software apparatus in the market .these gadgets checks the spellings and other study work of students and create curiosity among students for learning. As a result, students do not feel monotonous while studying with the help of electronic gadgets.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, other alternatives are lucrative for study. However still I believe that without teachers a student life is like a ship without sailor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, thus, while, as for, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61165048544 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90706589924 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7354882062 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.875 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169374183317 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537596317826 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494276164663 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112036186991 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833993981319 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.37 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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