The author claims that woven baskets weren`t anciently palean. To support the conclusion, he cites various evidence. Although,those evidence seem to bolster the authors argument,a precise analysis show otherwise. So the author needs to cite the following evidence to sound the argument good.1)The evidence that those two boats have same distinctive pattern. 2) was the boating only way to go to Lithos across the brim river.
Firstly,the author cites about the discoveries of such a "palean" basket in Lithos across the Brim river. The author doesn`t provides the evidence that the boat was the same with same particular distinctive pattern. If there was a evidence may be picture of both the boats then,it would have bolster the point but here rather it seems to weaken the authors statement.
Secondly,there is no precise mentioning of the exact way to the Lithos village thats across Brim river. The author would have talked about boating is the only way to be in Lithos. But there is no such strong statement that its the only way.If there was then it would have strengthen the argument but since there is no such evidence we can`t conclude on that basis only. There might have been other alternatives like ropeways above the river to go to Lithos rather than boating.This can be the possibilities too.
Last but not the least,the author should have provided the strong evidence to bolster his argument. Rather,his insufficient evidence just undermined the argument. And he can`t just conclude persisting on those evidences.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 260 350
No. of Characters: 1242 1500
No. of Different Words: 125 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.016 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.777 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.38 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.812 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.505 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , those
...ion, he cites various evidence. Although,those evidence seem to bolster the authors ar...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ough,those evidence seem to bolster the authors argument,a precise analysis show otherw...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...nce seem to bolster the authors argument,a precise analysis show otherwise. So the...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w otherwise. So the author needs to cite the following evidence to sound the argu...
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Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... Lithos across the brim river. Firstly,the author cites about the discoveries of s...
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Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hor cites about the discoveries of such a 'palean' basket in Lithos acr...
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Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cular distinctive pattern. If there was a evidence may be picture of both the boa...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ce may be picture of both the boats then,it would have bolster the point but here r...
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Line 2, column 308, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bolstered'.
Suggestion: bolstered
...re of both the boats then,it would have bolster the point but here rather it seems to w...
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Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... but here rather it seems to weaken the authors statement. Secondly,there is no pre...
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Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...eaken the authors statement. Secondly,there is no precise mentioning of the exact ...
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Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thors statement. Secondly,there is no precise mentioning of the exact way to t...
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Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... of the exact way to the Lithos village thats across Brim river. The author would hav...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... there is no such strong statement that its the only way.If there was then it would...
^^^
Line 4, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
... strong statement that its the only way.If there was then it would have strengthen...
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Line 4, column 274, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'strengthened'.
Suggestion: strengthened
...nly way.If there was then it would have strengthen the argument but since there is no such...
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Line 4, column 484, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ver to go to Lithos rather than boating.This can be the possibilities too. Last b...
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Line 6, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ibilities too. Last but not the least,the author should have provided the strong ...
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Line 6, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , his
...evidence to bolster his argument. Rather,his insufficient evidence just undermined t...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onclude persisting on those evidences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 55.5748502994 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 2260.96107784 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 250.0 441.139720559 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.272 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90126593059 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 204.123752495 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 705.55239521 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.531365887 57.8364921388 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8666666667 119.503703932 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 23.324526521 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 5.70786347227 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137661129305 0.218282227539 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511212457435 0.0743258471296 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388630777317 0.0701772020484 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877112207976 0.128457276422 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370508549679 0.0628817314937 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 98.500998004 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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