You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a
letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Ask for some suggestions for what to do
Find out if there are any local events happening at the time
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mr. Robert,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I am visiting Brampton, Ontario province, Canada, in coming month march. Therefore, I need some information regarding sites to visit for tourists.
Although I have two weeks to spend there from 1st march to 15th march, hoping that it would be a unforgettable trip. I prefer to stay in a home stay since it will add more flavors to my trip. In order to gain deep knowledge about the place, I think two weeks are enough.
I request you to suggest me regarding the types of home stays along with their cost , attractive places to visit and other activities which can make my trip worth. Kindly, recommend me when and where to arrive so that i can arrange myself according to the requirements.
Furthermore, tell me about if there are any upcoming events in between those days as if I like any event , I can buy tickets in advance. since I do not want to miss any opportunity to enjoy there, you can send me schedule regarding the same on my e-mail- parkersophy678@hotmail.com.
Looking forward for your prompt reply.
With regards, 13th February,2019
Sophy Parker
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Mr. Robert, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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... regarding sites to visit for tourists. Although I have two weeks to spend there...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... to 15th march, hoping that it would be a unforgettable trip. I prefer to stay in...
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...he place, I think two weeks are enough. I request you to suggest me regarding t...
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...enough. I request you to suggest me regarding the types of home stays along...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...request you to suggest me regarding the types of home stays along with their cos...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ypes of home stays along with their cost , attractive places to visit and other ac...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...end me when and where to arrive so that i can arrange myself according to the req...
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Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...e myself according to the requirements. Furthermore, tell me about if there are ...
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Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...etween those days as if I like any event , I can buy tickets in advance. since I d...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...y event , I can buy tickets in advance. since I do not want to miss any opportunity t...
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Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...chedule regarding the same on my e-mail- parkersophy678@hotmail.com. Looking...
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...my e-mail- parkersophy678@hotmail.com. Looking forward for your prompt reply. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...for your prompt reply. With regards, 13th February,2019 Sophy Parker
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Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'February 2019'.
Suggestion: February 2019
... 13th February,2019 Sophy Parker
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... 13th February,2019 Sophy Parker
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81218274112 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03348650113 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690355329949 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.440250943 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1818181818 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165044227371 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598926385786 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651330654988 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084384714505 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785858510037 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.