in recent times, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do shopping. is this the positive development or negative?
Although in this contemporary era everything becomes easier, one have number of ways to buy things. Since nowadays in almost every city numerous shopping malls has been opened, it becomes convenient for the people to buy things under one roof. However, many local shops have been closed due to these shopping centres, it makes shopkeepers unemloyed. It is definitely a positive development, let us discuss the aspects of the given topic in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, let us discuss the advantages of the shopping malls. First and foremost, in shopping malls one can buy all the things as there is variety of shops. To explain, people prefer to do shopping at the malls not only to save their time but also they can get different things also can compare the products. In addition, at the malls people can observe the things by their own since all the products are displayed for the convenience of people.To elaborate, at the shopping malls people have chance to explore all the things by their own as everyone likes freedom. For example, Best Price superstore, where people do the groceries as well as shopping.
Furthermore, let us analyse more benefits of shopping centres. Primarily, shopping malls becomes one of the best recreational places in order to refresh people as there are some sections are built specially for the children though they can also watch movies. To clarify, it is beneficial for both children and parents because it includes nearly all the facilities for enjoyment for all the age groups. To continue, people do not have to face the problem of parking as it is one of the biggest issue in the developing the countries. To substantiate, as long as people do shopping they do not have to worry about their vehicle as they can park it inside the mall safely, can buy their things in one building. To illustrate, paid parking in the shopping malls is more convenient to people as they do not have to find place to park their vehicle as when they do shopping outside the shopping centres.
To encapsulate , it can be concluded that it is not only easy and safe to shopping in the mall but also people can relax themselves in single building. However, it depends on the people that where they find comfortable to purchase their goods of requirement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84223918575 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64726652359 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458015267176 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7938251241 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.941176471 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247124105004 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928274398339 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630501374449 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156238092052 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594041680106 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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