The following is part of a memorandum from the president of Humana University.
"Last year the number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offered by nearby Omni University increased by 50 percent. During the same year, Omni showed a significant decrease from prior years in expenditures for dormitory and classroom space, most likely because instruction in the online programs takes place via the Internet. In contrast, over the past three years, enrollment at Humana University has failed to grow, and the cost of maintaining buildings has increased along with our budget deficit. To address these problems, Humana University will begin immediately to create and actively promote online degree programs like those at Omni. We predict that instituting these online degree programs will help Humana both increase its total enrollment and solve its budget problems."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
According to the president of Human University, In the previous year the number of students who has enrolled in online degree programs offered by Omni university has increased by fifty percent. And in the same period the university has decreased its expenditures for dormitory and classroom space due online programs which takes place through internet. And in Contrast from past three years the enrollment at Humana University has failed to grow, and the cost has increased along with the budget deficit. So address this the president has suggested to create an active online degree program like those of Omni. So that it will help Humana to increase the enrollment and solve the budget problems. But this might not be entirely true
Firstly, The number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offered by Omni university has increased by fifty percentage. The increase might due to good quality of lectures provided by Omni university. The lecturers might be well trained to describe the topic in proper manner. They have said that Omni university is nearby so if the students who might have doubts can go to the university to clarify their doubts by the lecturers if they are not addressed online. We do not have any idea how the online online program is conducted, i.e whether its live program session or offline program session whether its interactive or not so the author has not specified the details of the online program session.
Secondly, Even if the online degree program was successful there might be few chances that the Omni university has pretty good name in the college list. Due to the good name of the college more students might have enrolled in the Online program that might not be the same case for Humana university. Even if Humana university starts their online program. The quality of the university matters most. If Omni university gives good subjects in their online program the student might choose this university rather than Humana. There might be chance that Omni university even offers placements i.e is recruitment of students after the completion of their degree. Few companies might come to recruit the students. So if Humana university wants to do that they should provide some advantage for the students.
Thirdly the author said that Omni university has showed significant decrease from prior years in expenditures for dormitories and classroom space but it might have increased the cost of equipment's to provide online degree programs. We need camera's recorders, computer's and more to make the online program successful which has not been mentioned. So Humana university should be ready to bear the expenses of the equipment's which might have costed more to reduce the cost for dormitory and classroom.
Finally, we can conclude that without proper and complete information about the Online Degree Program one cannot actively promote online degree program for Humana university. If they want to promote online degree program it should completely follow all the process which Omni university has followed. If not there wont be much change in the enrollment or the expenditures rather the expenditure might increase with all their promoting and equipment's.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 524 350
No. of Characters: 2649 1500
No. of Different Words: 213 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.784 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.055 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.569 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 211 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 145 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 100 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 66 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.96 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.933 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.68 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.369 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.522 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.146 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 540, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested creating'.
Suggestion: suggested creating
...icit. So address this the president has suggested to create an active online degree program like th...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: online
...online. We do not have any idea how the online online program is conducted, i.e whether its l...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...be the same case for Humana university. Even if Humana university starts their online p...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...quality of the university matters most. If Omni university gives good subjects in ...
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Line 9, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e degree program for Humana university. If they want to promote online degree prog...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.9520958084 162% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 55.5748502994 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2693.0 2260.96107784 119% => OK
No of words: 522.0 441.139720559 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15900383142 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.56307096286 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60356386426 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 204.123752495 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.39846743295 0.468620217663 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 866.7 705.55239521 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.030373074 57.8364921388 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.208333333 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 23.324526521 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70833333333 5.70786347227 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.20758483034 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396815809477 0.218282227539 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137347755238 0.0743258471296 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107842824749 0.0701772020484 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254286177464 0.128457276422 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871613308754 0.0628817314937 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.3799401198 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.3550499002 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 98.500998004 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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