The given maps illustrates the undeveloped area of a small town called Islip and plan made to construct different housing and infrastructure to make the centre developed.
Overall, their is a great plan made to develop a town. The main principle change to the town will be a ring road. whereas, various other development with regards housing and shops has accompanied.
With regards to the Islip which is now, we can see that a main road runs through its centre from east and west. There are major small shops which is situated in the both side of main road.Schools in the southern part of the town town near housing area cover a small spaces and we can see a big park in the eastern part of centre now.
On the basic of construction plan that is made for development, Firstly in the north side of area, space has to be made for bus station, shopping centre and car parks. Pedestrians area should be placed in between infractures and small shops.However, new housing has to be made in northern and southern part of city respectively. While Dual carriage way should be placed in the ring road. Likewise, school and housing should be away from ring road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... make the centre developed. Overall, their is a great plan made to develop a town....
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Suggestion: Whereas
...change to the town will be a ring road. whereas, various other development with regards...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'run'?
Suggestion: run
...ich is now, we can see that a main road runs through its centre from east and west. ...
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Suggestion: Schools
... situated in the both side of main road.Schools in the southern part of the town town n...
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Suggestion: town
...oad.Schools in the southern part of the town town near housing area cover a small spaces ...
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...Firstly in the north side of area, space has to be made for bus station, shopping...
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Suggestion: However
... in between infractures and small shops.However, new housing has to be made in norther...
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Suggestion:
...all shops.However, new housing has to be made in northern and southern part of ci...
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...and southern part of city respectively. While Dual carriage way should be placed in ...
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Suggestion:
...ectively. While Dual carriage way should be placed in the ring road. Likewise, sc...
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...d in the ring road. Likewise, school and housing should be away from ring road.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, likewise, so, whereas, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66829268293 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63446249232 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517073170732 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8086498718 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209953247823 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852781669606 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077778375996 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146157823731 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726691332174 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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