You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releva

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">The graph illustrates the rate of female unemployment in four countries (England, Wales, Scotland, Northern Ireland) of the united kingdom in the years 2013 to 2014.

Overall, unemployment rate in 2013 is more than 2014. In 2013 England had the highest percentage of female unemployees and Scotland recorded the highest percentage in 2014. Wales and Northern Ireland had the lowest female unemployment in 2013 and 2014 consecutively.

In England there was 6.8% of unemployment rate in 2013. It diminished slightly in the next year and reached 6.5%. Northern Ireland shows significant decrease in the female unemployment with a decrease of 1% in 2014 and stands at 4.6 % with lowest female employees. Wales had lowest percentage of female unemployees with 5.4% in 2013 with a minimal decrease in one year it hit 5.0%.

In contrast to remaining three countries Scotland percentage of women unemployment rate increased. In 2013 It had only 6.1% of jobless women with an increase of 0.6% it climbed to the highest percentage of women unemployment rate with 6.7% in 2014.</span><br>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the lowest'.
Suggestion: with the lowest
...rease of 1% in 2014 and stands at 4.6 % with lowest female employees. Wales had lowest perc...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
...6 % with lowest female employees. Wales had lowest percentage of female unemployees with 5...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f jobless women with an increase of 0.6% it climbed to the highest percentage of ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44571428571 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43764086864 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462857142857 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1867201623 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207796685194 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104546806366 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539161219219 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14675823533 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320437246816 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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