It is observed that the ethnic costume plays a pivotal role in the unique identification of a country. However, rampant changes are taking place because of the globalization of the culture, and it impacting the traditional wears as well. In my opinion, national wears are the soul and identity of a country, but, in today's fast-paced life demands more comfortable dressing sense and adaptability of clothing change.
Firstly, national costumes provide a sense of being rooted in our tradition and culture. It is a way of portraying the heritage, that a country carrying from decades. For instance, in India, Saree for women and Kurta with a Dhoti for men are the traditional wears, which is being worn in a different way across the country. Secondly, an ethnic dress provides a feel of uniqueness in the world, it depicts the simplicity and authenticity. For example, people wear ethnic dresses on several festivals around the year to look pretty, beautiful and connected as a community.
Although, traditional wear have their own value and charm, with the changing time people do not want to look a bit different from others. Most of the people around the globe follow the current trend, which also makes them look equal in all manner, it is like the adaptability of the latest fashion. According to research by a prominent world magazine "The Legals", people of all ages like to wear most the comfortable pieces of Denim and shirts for any occasion. Apart from this, the trendsetters find new ways to create a fusion of traditional and modern clothing as well, so that they can become more comfortable and trendy.
Concluding my opinion, I would say that, traditional wear is the identity of a nation, we feel rooted to our culture and heritage. However, modern wear is for the comfort and for uniqueness among the nations, that anyone can follow, and there is no threat to traditional wear by this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... traditional wears, which is being worn in a different way across the country. Secondly, an ethnic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97204968944 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81707148436 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549689440994 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9585598139 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190443460981 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658338513153 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04490678368 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12098734209 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356225919979 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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