There will be no fish in the pure water, as the old chinese political saying tells us, I belive in some case the political leaders should keep certain infromation as secret for the public due to both harmoniuos and political consideration. And there are some kind of information like the public affair relate to the daily life should let the people know. I will address my views with three points below.
To begin with, not all infromation should be publicized when it related to the national safety and other high profiled information. Also, when the national safety become serious the political leaders always make prudent consideration. Let's get back to the Pearl Harbour, the War II. The president Roosvelt had recognized the significance of US dispatching troops to European and Pacific battlefields. While, on the contrary, the congress did not want to let the US involved with a War in other continents, thus the congress rejected his suggestion.
After hearing from the Information Agency that the Japanese would assault the Navy force in the Pearl Harbour, Roosvelt made the most important choice in his life that cost hundreds of life, he kept this secret and let the Japanese plane rushed into the aircraft at the harbour. This bitter end irritated the congress. After that strike,as we all knew, the US got in the War II and fight together with allies and won the War II finally. So tough as it was, so many lives gone with the secret which revealed decades later. We could not predict what the world woulb be without the help of the USA in the War II, but we can appreciate the life today with the support of them.
In addition, if the political leaders withhold some infromation to the people which is scandal for them. There are two ways to go for them. Firstly, keep it to death. OK,that's awesome like no outsiders know anything about the Zone 51 in the US, some say there the military found aliens, some say there is a high-tech military base which researching secret waepons.
While on the other hand, think about the end of the president Nixion after the watergate scandal, and the public figure of US Goverment after the Soden affair which leaked so many secrets along with scandals and ancdotes. These public crsis is like the time bomb, if you are tough enough, that is ok, you can let the lion of the public asleep, while this is just an imagination as there is no another story like Zone 51 presently some the lion will tear the Government figure in pieces.
So as we discussed, there are some kinds of infromations which should let every citizen know clearly and comprehensively like the daily life affaris and the officials' incomes. In this point, I should praise the US makes a good example for the world, because I believe every democractic country want to do so while they can not replicate the policy of publicizing the officials' income comprehensively. This is what every taxpayer should know basically as they are the ones who pay the offcials' salaries.
In conslusion, I bleive there are some kinds of infromation that the political leaders should keep them in secret due to the harmony and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, thus, while, in addition, kind of, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2597.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 543.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78268876611 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5705171552 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48802946593 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 812.7 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9966205811 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.913043478 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6086956522 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205739486135 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578907744337 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608599402579 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106019951374 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499660890055 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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