Some countries, they give extremely high salaries. Some people think that , this is good for country while other think that government should reduce amount of salary.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Generally speaking , one factor plays very significant role in the development of any nation that is money . Huge amount of money touches various aspects such as global credibility and most importantly , living style of citizens. In myriad of nation , plethora of people earn big amount of money as work . Many people ponder that , this is good for country while other mull that , the authority should control salaries. I will discuss my own view regarding to this topic in approaching paragraphs.
To embark on , money is very rudimentary for common people and receiving a colossal amount of money complete a various aspects. Firstly , by the good amount of salaries , individuals can fulfil their obligatory needs and spend luxurious life , which will be throw the good impressions on countries reputation. Secondly , huge amount of salary can help to escalate the G.D.P economy of nation and support in countries growth . A report had been published by the U.S.A times and they printed that , roughly 27.3 % of G.D.P of nation attach with job payments and expenditure of citizens.
On the flip side , money is panacea of every thing , by the reduction in the amount of salary and use this amount in certain ways . Firstly , unemployment have been become a vast problem , if government use remainder money in other job and authority should provide more opportunities and utilize this money for reduce of unemployment rate . This money should use for betterment in medical system and transport system because when these fundamental need will be complete than the country will grow .For instance , Chinese government they have been cut off in salary of employees and use these I space exploration and health system.
To be recapitulate , as per I am concerned , government should have control on the salary because it will be help for developing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.127090301 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79021064201 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9149819556 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201363240259 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775736578222 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630835818105 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122423073482 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420144556691 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.