Is watching TV bad for children?
Nowadays, with developing of technology children have verity options to spend their leisure time activity. Many of them prefer to watch TV because of the attractive program that plays in all hours of the day and night. Definitely, some people if asked would agree with the statement that watching TV is harmful to children and others have a negative attitude. As I am concerned, I oppose this opinion. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on arguments to support my views.
The first and the most reason is that many of the tv programs are educational for children. Children can learn tough lessons on tv, easily. The producers that make a program for children use attractive pictures and sounds in order to attract more viewer. With aid of audio and visual, the learning process would faster rather than when they instruct with a traditional teacher. To illustrate that idea let’s consider the following example. I remember when I was a child, my parents enrolled me in an English language institute. I had to participate in the class that I did not interest in teaching methods of my teacher. In contrast, after finishing my class, I was impatiently waiting for a cartoon that taught children English by use of laughing situation and music. As a consequence, my English improve through this program much more than boring methods of my teacher.
The second reason is that watching television broaden children horizon and knowledge. Children can gain information about the culture and history of children’s in another country. This knowledge assists them when they grow up, they accept other people from different race and religion without struggling with them. For instance, when child watch a program that kids with unlike religions of Islam, Christianity in Judaism has a peaceful life, they learn subconsciously to respect the opinions of others. In fact, many of ethical meaning could train to kids via TV program.
However, in order to grow children in the right direction, parents always vigilance the program that their kid is supposed to watch because there are a lot of programs that are not proper for them.
By the way of conclusion, base on the arguments explored above I am of the opinion that the advantages of watching program are much and children should be permitted to watch their favorite program because many of them educating and help to broaden their knowledge. But a parent should keep an eye on what their kids want to observe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: improves
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, for instance, in contrast, in fact, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99516908213 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72108498293 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526570048309 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1891646593 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77272727273 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305998574443 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921416626452 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889432838008 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180333091488 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377579417012 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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