You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorr

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to you to complain about the recent charges applied in the statement dated 30th March 2018 on my account which I am holding with Karaulbag branch of HDFC bank.

My account no is HD1234 and I have opened this account in your branch 4.5 years before. You may verify my Average Monthly Balance (AMB) and I am sure that you would notice of regularity of high balance on my account. Though, your bank offers overdraft facility with some changes, fortunately I have never been in a need of availing it. But to my surprise, the last statement sent to me via email, has an entry of an overdraft fees of $70 which is linked to an overdraft transaction of $240, which I never performed. I am sure it must be mistakenly charged due to system error.

I request you to take corrective measures at the earliest and reverse the wrongly applied charged on my account. Also, I look forward for receiving revised statement, after correction, for my records.

I will wait for your reply at the earliest. Thanks I'm anticipation.

Yours sincerely,
Vivek

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...lbag branch of HDFC bank. My account no is HD1234 and I have opened this accoun...
^^
Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... for your reply at the earliest. Thanks Im anticipation. Yours sincerely, Vive...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69473684211 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63439848953 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7761786917 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0909090909 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328373804822 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110363072721 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672487592551 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180272286122 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488303364224 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.