It is observed that most government pay lot of money for art project for instance , there are more and more paintings and sculpture seen in public places. Some people think that it is wrong and government should spend money on other important thing .
Do you agree or disagree.
Art in the form of literature, theme and visual art represents the culture heritage of society. Society with rich custom in art and poetry are considered more urban and advancement . Government around the globe invest a huge amount of money on art in an attempt to bring eminenc in people life . I partially agree with this statement . However , funding should be made an other claims that are more critical in human life such and employment, health .
To embark on , some people think that , art is very beneficial for them . Firstly , investment in painting and sculpture promote the tourism and enhance economy of country because it is reflection culture and tradition also it is heritage of more value. Moreover, the creative pursuit of country and in this stream they get name and fame also they achieve myriad of award . Although , day by day arts it very popular and many people prefer the art subject . Secondly , so government invest for art project because it is very interesting and no one bore in this stream. For instance , we can see that many school have been made art subject which is compulsory. A report conducted by the human resources department government research , nowadays 80 % people have preferred art subject it has been great influenced on the individuals life . Apart from the, they gain plethora of knowledge about the globe .
On the flip side, some considered that authority should invest in other sectors, which is responsible for soaring G.D.P of country. Moving further , there are different kind of skill like education , health literacy rate , equally peace and harmony . As per, it has been exemplary for them. For example , in foreign countries there are plenty of facilities available about the other thing but they are equally important both the skill because they know that any skills are very pivotal for everyone. Further more , we would say equally importance to every domain is required which proliferate the growth and economy of country. A recent survey by the world economic association, 85 % people like to other skills in primitive years they were more importance rather than art skills .In future it will be very useful for them .
To recaptiulated, I strongly believe that , both play significant role in individuals life so law makers should invest in both the skill as per it has been huge impact on the every one lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01526717557 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63687761998 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539440203562 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2532993819 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.55 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.65 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 52.0 5.01903807615 1036% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283874599152 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080563947371 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559893763876 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145540349939 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750085956171 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.