Over the last century, in the vast majority of communities we could witness an unprecedented global obesity, which is the inevitable consequence of drastic alteration in our lifestyles. A rampant jeopardy entwined with our health and fitness and if the appropriate precautions aren't applied, our health would be endangered substantially with fat-related diseases such as heart attack or blood pressure and son on. I delve the main reasons and possible measures to avoid these problems in the following essay, briefly.
To embark with, the new lifestyle and adapting to modern society can be accounted as the principal culprit of this thread; as we see most of the people, even adolescents, prefer to collapse in front of screens after work or school and it appears that exercise or any kind of physical recreational activities have been being neglected gradually. Widespread acceptance of junk foods and fizzy beverages due to convenience, availability and lower-time consuming is the other factor which is fraught with a barrage of criticism from health centers. Finally, our modern lifestyle needing resistance against pressure of strains is the last reason that leads us to mental disorders and self-negligence and in some cases accompanies with overeating and avoidance from any restraints in our food habits.
Despite these drawbacks counted as the most common perils jeopardizing the human health, there are some effective measures to grapple these factors. Frequent and consecutive exercise and consumption of healthier enriched foods are accounted as solutions not only for loosing extra-weight and the prevention of any diseases, but also enhances people's morale and self-esteem. Propagation of self-esteem leading to attention to ourselves and try to allocate time for culinary at home instead of restaurants' high-fat foods are the salient examples of what we can do to inhibit our bad habits and boost our health up.
In conclusion, however, it seems that increasing weight and subsequent problems in our health and fitness have become prevalent owing to the dominance of modern lifestyle in this era, refinement of food habits and exercise can easily eclipse any negative aspects of these common problems.
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- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? 89
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 89
- Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, however, if, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43641618497 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98123173498 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615606936416 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.654775539 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.1 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158791704421 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624540208219 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397233675823 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098422357911 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362575392192 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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