Should boys and girls go to separate school?
Separation girls and boys in different school are one of a controversial subject. Definitely, some people if asked would agree with the statement that boys and girls should attend separate school while others have a negative attitude. As I am the concern, I completely agree with attending boys and girls in separate school. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on arguments for supporting my views.
The first reason is that attending the separate school help them to increase the concentration on their academic curriculum. Many of research demonstrated that sex attraction exists between girls and boys even in young ages as result single-sex school eliminate the distractions due to the sexual appeal. To illustrate that idea let’s consider the following example. I remember, my parents enrolled me in all-female school, sometimes, I complain about why they did not let me participate in co-ed school, but my parent always emphasized that when you go to school you should only concentrate on your academic goals. In a co-ed school, maybe an emotional relationship with a boy distract you and influenced your academic purpose. They always told me you would have a lot of chance to meet boys in society but for school, it is better for you to go to single-sex school.
The second reason for my supporting views is that girls and boys have significant differences in the way of learning and hobbies. In a single-sex school, teachers can teach their student in the way that proper for all of the students to understand their lessons better. For example in all-female school, they can instruct concepts by means of a practical example that more related to emotion and beauty. Furthermore, boys very in hobbies with girls, with separate their school, school executive could invest on a kind of hobbies that proper for girls or boys and this would result in they can save some money on another facility.
By the way of conclusion, base on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that for girls and boys is better to attend in separate school to concentrate on their academic goals without any distraction of opposite sex in school. Besides, girls and boys have a different ability and hobbies that with separate them, the teachers and an executive school could provide ways that good for them
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...heir student in the way that proper for all of the students to understand their lessons be...
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Line 3, column 630, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an save some money on another facility. By the way of conclusion, base on the ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, while, for example, kind of, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97680412371 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75748987279 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469072164948 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6189900478 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.6875 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474192284245 0.236089414692 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178628589053 0.076458572812 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120133257285 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332253504694 0.150856017488 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817643509195 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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