Why go to university?
Nowadays many of students after graduating from high school are deciding to attend college for a couple of reasons such as gaining knowledge, follow their dreams and so on. In my opinion, the purposes of go to university are achieved a better job position and socialize with new people from different culture. To shed light on this argument, two main reasons are going to be discussed in the following paragraphs.
The first point to be mentioned is that with attending university and obtaining high degree you will have a wide job offer and more eligibility to get a job in comparison to the other competitors. For example, many companies that work in the computer area hired engineers with high academic degrees because of that one of an important question in a working interview of those companies is about your educations. They know university often train student many of practical knowledge and skill that necessary for work circumstances. So as you see with an academic degree you will have greater chances to get a job.
The second reason is that when you attending college you can interact with other people from different city or even different countries. For instance, my father graduated from Toronto University fifteen years ago. He makes friend with several people from other countries like USA, Japan. Despite years passed, he yet connects with his friends. He always told us how attending college change his opinion about other religions and culture and consequently, he gains wide information about other people in the world.
In conclusion, attending university is a key factor to get a job in the competitive world today and also you will expose in a diverse culture that can help you make new friends.
- TPO 28 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Only people who earn a lot of money are successful 83
- TPO6 Q1Integrated TOEFL writing 3
- TPO 15 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In order to become financially responsible adults children should learn to manage their own money at a young age Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 83
- Tpo 31 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 530, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... that necessary for work circumstances. So as you see with an academic degree you wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99305555556 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70907219266 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6524012183 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108436242445 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457458708856 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564597808081 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738141344389 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426878079594 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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