With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
With the advancement of technology, people have got the luxury of living modern life. Because of the hectic schedule, they prefer eating fast food. This essay will explain how the disadvantages of consuming fast food outweigh the advantages.
In this modern era people consider time as money. They work for long hours in office to gain more salary and hence cannot find time to prepare their meal. Additionally, junk food is considered a convenient meal because it can be consumed easily and are cheaper. A recent survey found that people in Brampton prefer a meal from Tim Horton's rather than preparing it at home to save time and money.
Having fast food on regular basis can be hazardous for health. There are increased chances of having obesity, diabetes, hypertension etc as a result of consumption of fast food regularly. Junk foods are generally high in saturated fatty acids and cholesterol which can impair human health. Along with this, replacing fast food with traditional meals also disturbs the family bonding as people will have packaged fast food at their own convenient time. The family bonding will also suffer as people of the family will not cook and share their recipes with each other and this will decrease communication between them.
To conclude it, having fast food can look advantageous for saving time, however, it can influence negatively on health and family bonding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06926406926 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55478749612 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4252275301 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0769230769 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28424212848 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104920235672 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583628492262 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17411599463 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626596191604 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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