In this modern era, large amount of population is moving towards fast food for their main source of meal. In this essay, I will discuss how consumption of fast food has more disadvantages over advantages.
To begin with, fast food, as the name defines, is readily available. In this century of competition and fast moving life, less people want to spend their precious time on cooking. Hence, many individuals prefer eating quickly available food. In addition, fast meal is being sold for cheap price. Further more, loads of variety of fast food is available and it tastes delicious. However, everything which is tasty and quickly available does not mean it serves all the benefits.
Firstly, this quickly available food does not fulfill our body's nutrient requirements. Secondly, fast food is considered as one of the major cause of plethora of deceases like diabetes, cholesterol, heart attack, blood pressure etc. Some of the sickness are not even treatable.Many researches and studies have proven that increased consumption of quick meals has reduced life expectancy to certain extent.
Moving towards conclusion, I believe that modern communities are giving more importance to earning money than paying attention to keeping themselves healthy; which results in people selecting whatever food is readily available than making healthy choices, However, we should keep in mind that their is nothing more important than staying free of deceases, for which we need a good source of meal. Considering disadvantages above, which clearly supersedes number of advantages of consuming fast food, we should move our preferences towards nutritious food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42635658915 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76766984925 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.5773292989 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340698241527 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123046338795 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791447824023 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216041652461 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090148408943 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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