How widely of you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? what problems will it cause?
In the savvy era people spend half of their life time for their work. There are many people spend most of their time spending for their jobs rather than spending for their family, as they are more concerned about their job security. This essay will discuss people experiences less time for their personal life and how the problems raises to those people in their family.
In this fast paced society, most of the people highlights their time shortage i for their personal life. There are many reasons, people spent too much time behind their professional life as they are more concentrated on their profession or due to their over dedication to the work. For instance, the doctors who spend most of their time in hospitals and with patients, they have short time with their family and children. In such families we can see the children they are less sociable and lonely. The communication between families are very important which can reduce a plethora of problems such as divorces, social crimes.
In addition, the communication among the family members is an inevitable factor to reduce wide range of problems. The communication gap can lead to majority of problems in the family. There are some people who concentrate more on their works, they do their work at office and even after back to home. If their any work pressure or any problems arises will reflect at home and leads to many other issues.
There is enough time for everybody in their life. We have to utilise our time in a pre-planned manner, which can be use effectively and which can help to reduce so many problems in the life rather than their professional life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...he savvy era people spend half of their life time for their work. There are many people s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81914893617 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45094983072 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482269503546 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0186376189 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0714285714 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.25397266985 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40880897925 0.242375264174 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163325857196 0.0925447433944 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102550424594 0.071462118173 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26240263415 0.151781067708 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816934772573 0.0609392437508 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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