Some people think healthcare should be made free for all people, while others believe people should pay for healthcare by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Medical care is one of the most essential component of an individual’s life. There is an ongoing debate over the significant expenditure, that health care demands. Some believe that, the governments should take care of the health of people, without asking any money from them, while others argue that an individual should take care of the medical bills. In my opinion, it is one of the logical and moral responsibilities on the part of government, to take care of the well being of its people, and medical facilities should be available to all for free.
To begin with, although, spending money for health related matters is a non-productive expense on the government’s part, it should be comprehensively taken care of by them. This is because, individuals are paying high taxes in hope of living a convenient and better life, and efficient medical coverage, is one of the key parameters to enhance the quality of life. Besides that, it is also a moral responsibility of the regulatory authorities, to reduce the sufferings of a person by providing quality medical care, even if that individual is financially unable to pay for it. By failing to do so, there will be increase in the disease burden, which will indirectly affect the growth of entire community and nation.
However, it is vital to establish a guideline, regarding the medical facilities and procedures to be provided for free. Improper planning in this regard will exert significant pressure on the government funds. For instance, it is essential to manage diseases like heart attacks, diabetic coma, and road traffic accident at the earliest, and the government should provide them for free, but procedures like dental bracing, breast augmentation, or fat removal surgeries, need not to be supported by free healthcare schemes, as none of them are life saving measures. There are numerous examples available, where injudicious use of free healthcare adversely affected the government finances to the extent, that whole system failed to function. The health care reforms in the United States of America is an appropriate example of this misuse, which forced the US government to withdraw many beneficial health care programs for its people.
In conclusion, although free health for all is a key responsibility of governments, and it should be promoted, yet there is a need of proper distribution of medical budget to avoid exhaustion of such an important and vital facility.
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Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much beneficial health', 'a good deal of beneficial health'.
Suggestion: much beneficial health; a good deal of beneficial health
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18341708543 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08353292485 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537688442211 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7762194901 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.357142857 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229876132835 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788389594058 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676490539067 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146212004138 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322081813374 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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