with the increase of digital media available online, the role of the library has become obsolete. Universities shouled only procure digital material rather than constantly textbooks. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this position and give own point of view.
The advantages of technology have enabled individuals to access digital media online; therefore, libraries may need to provide online materials for students rather than updating textbooks. this essay will elaborate the positive and negative effects of using online books and paper books and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why accessing digital books are crucial these days, but the most conspicuos one stems from the fact that in this ultra modern society, students are more comfortable and confident to explore the digital media to access books to undertake their assessments.these could lead to save valuable time and even to share educational materials with their classmates, which can allow to be more efficient and effective to accomplish their educational commitments.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposite view and people tend to believe that textbooks play still a key role in society because mature people are not proficient to use the digital media to access online materials and they may be left out to access useful material. thus individuals deserve to access a range of reading material regardless of the plataform in which these are exposed.
From what have been discussed above, it can be concluded that online books can be suitable for certain people; however text books are still important for others. people should have the freedom to choose the material they need according to their needs and skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3093220339 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70219077069 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588983050847 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.647793493 50.4703680194 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.0 104.977214359 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7142857143 20.9669160288 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166341947028 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770805882253 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076237538254 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102329248173 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647536503665 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 12.6369458128 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.9458128079 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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