People are sleeping less than in the past. Why do people do it? What are the effects of this?
Today we are in competitive world, where people work round the clock irrespective of day or night, either as a student or an employee. This has several implication on the routine human behavior, as a result sleep gets disturbed to the highest extent. Lack of sleep is a Global issue hence people should be made aware of importance for healthy life and consequence of sleeplessness.
Sleep is considered as one of the best natural medicine ever human had since civilization, which helps to keep up the healthy life, although knowing importance of sleep, people are not having enough sleep in this 21st century because of several reason, few of them are anxiety, depression, excess consumption of caffeine, usage of technological gadgets before going to sleep, monitor staring for hours at office, urbanization, traffic, pollution, unhealthy food diet have paved a way to lack of sleep among the people of this century. As per the recent research, people are sleeping lesser than what they used to sleep a decade ago, it has reduced considerably from 10 hours to 6 hours a day and they found out that this change is because of technological advancement and peer pressure among youths.
The consequence of less sleep is devastating on the health of the individual, few have immediate consequence, other may be in the long run. The most common effect of lack of sleep is obesity and memory loss. however there are several issues like head ache, lack of concentration, cardiac problems, dark circles and so on. Insomnia is very commonly found in today's generation where people face trouble to have a good sleep. Hence we need to adopt healthy life style and regular exercise to over come all this and have a calm sleep.
To conclude, in this generation we have several roles and responsibility to take care of, however maintaining good health should be of utmost priority and this can be achieved from having a good sleep on daily basis. Hence Sleep is considered as a boon to the man kind that leads to a healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87826086957 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7579919577 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568115942029 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.626125547 49.4020404114 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.25 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248906915753 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894315189858 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487173479068 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132669542241 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527280408771 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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