It is often observed that new unusual behavior is evolving among humans, which is devoting less or no hours for their sleep. This aforesaid behavior is very dangerous, the habit of sleeping less can harm mentally and physically as well. In this essay I will elaborate on the adverse effects and why people following this tendency.
To embark with, certainly nowadays population is surrounded by technology and fast-paced life do not provide them time to relax. Gadgets like mobile phones, televisions, and laptops always lure an individual with vibrant interesting content. On the other hand ease of commute and various automata saves the human effort and they do not feel tired in a similar way to the people from past who used to feel while they do some hard work in areas like agriculture or industries. Apart from this, their commitment to achieving targets at work is also one factor which implies mental pressure to avoid sleep. In a recent piece of news by prominent "The Times", around sixty percent of students study at night because they can avoid the noise and day disturbance, hence it is a wit full idea along with long term adverse effects. Consequently, the majority is dwelling the importance of a sound sleep.
On the other hand, it is inevitable that current technology is amazing and always fascinating, although it is making virtual life more attractive than the actual one, engaging all-time in these intangible facts can make a phycological disbalance in mind. Sleeping is a panacea, it provides a sound re-creative and healing time to body from stress and disbalance of life, also, our mind creates strong memories and bond between the nerves which can provide further strength. In an empirical survey conducted by London's "Oxford University", ascertained that around seventy percent of employees counter some detrimental accidents at work or diseases due to lack of sleep, and giving preference to work over a nap. Apparently, people behave poorly in taking decisions and their body function in an abnormal manner.
To conclude, sleeping is vital for the phycological as well as physical well being of a person, for this they need to understand the significance of sleep and relaxation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, consequently, hence, if, so, well, while, apart from, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13698630137 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85544125401 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0125069676 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.928571429 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247669584514 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760550676912 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724791067317 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139333198214 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735085253709 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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