nation should require all of its students to study all the same national curiiculum until they enter college
The given statement suggests that a nation should require all of its students to study all the same national curiiculum until they enter college i.e uptill highschool each and every student will studey the same subjects irrispective of his/her interests , background and this will be deemed mandatory by the government the statement is quite thought provocative but is flawed as follows
If the curriculam is made eqaual for all that would mean that students from different backgrounds will have to study the same curriculam but that would simply means that we expect the same result from everyone a student from a village or from a city and for example if the curriculam from cities is made mandatory in villages then the situation will be like this - it is a known fact that due to poor facilities the cirriculam at villages is made a little easier for the students to be able to study but work together with their studies a s many students in village do not have the same resources as the students from cities and vice versa.
One more point to be noted here is that this will require all the private schools to change their regulations but that can impact the students in a major way as some of these schools have their own curriculam which is kind of specialized in one field or another example a school may speacilize in computerscience and say the new curriculam does not have all the subjects from the previous curriculam what this will do is degrade the quality of students from that school and in some ways reduce the imagination and creativity of the students enrolled in these private colleges as the students found in these colleges do not wish to study the same curriculam like everyone what they wish is a education curriculam which is flexible to their needs.
But one case can be made infavour of this statement is same curriculam will mean equality among the students in terms of knowledge and growth at the time of their graduation from the highschool but as we know that a nation is consisted of many different regions which have different resourses different interest the equality might become a burdon on some students.
Hence, the statement is valid only for a single case i.e bringing every student on the same platform by the means of an a common curriculam but if we explore other expects of education and how it should be equal for everybody but at the same time encourage everyone to be creative , imaginative and at the end is different for each and every student we can simply say that the given statement is flawed and can be rejected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...bjects irrispective of his/her interests , background and this will be deemed man...
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Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ective of his/her interests , background and this will be deemed mandatory by the...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll have to study the same curriculam but that would simply means that we expect t...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...dy but work together with their studies a s many students in village do not have ...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a major way" with adverb for "major"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ations but that can impact the students in a major way as some of these schools have their own...
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Line 5, column 690, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...riculam like everyone what they wish is a education curriculam which is flexible ...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...s we know that a nation is consisted of many different regions which have different resourses ...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: an; a
...nt on the same platform by the means of an a common curriculam but if we explore oth...
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Line 9, column 281, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e time encourage everyone to be creative , imaginative and at the end is different...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, for example, kind of, all the same
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 450.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72444444444 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6091893474 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406666666667 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 112.0 23.0359550562 486% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 268.304863914 60.3974514979 444% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 531.5 118.986275619 447% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 112.5 23.4991977007 479% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.25 5.21951772744 311% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292365408658 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161707517256 0.0831039109588 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115513600987 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188511948342 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168165181281 0.0667264976115 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 57.1 14.1392134831 404% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -33.74 48.8420337079 -69% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 45.8 12.1743820225 376% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.28 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.68 8.38706741573 139% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 11.8971910112 479% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 46.8 11.2143820225 417% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 11.7820224719 484% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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