nation should require all of its students to study all the same national curiiculum until they enter college
The author's arugent about how reducing the time of local and weather news has decreased their revenue and the solution to this problem is by restoring the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level is fundamentally flawed as it relies on some flawed addumptions which are
Firstly the author talks about complaints from viewers abiut their coverage of local and weather news but fails to provide a certain detail about the number of viewers i.e do these viewers who are registerening complains amount for the majority and if not than their complains and views can not be made a major criteria for the change in timings. The author could have stated that x % of the viers i.e maybe 60%,70% etc have complained or the majority are unsatisfied with the coverage.
Secondly the auther fails to state whether viewers are unhappy about the coverage or the timimgs because maybe the time given to the local and weather news is appropriate but the information delivered by the news channel does not cover all the happenings in the local town and is only aboult the small and less important events.
Moreover the author states that local business that used to advertise with the news channel have canceled their contracts with them but he fails to provide a proper premise that whether this is due to reduction in time or any other reason such as loss to he local business or the ineffectivity of advertising at late-night news program. To strenthen this agrument the author coul have given a survey report from the local businesses stating major reason for cancellation is reduction in time.
Hence due to these flawed assumption- wheather the viewers complaining account for the majority of the viewers and are they unhappy with the coverage or the amount of time devoted and also that is reduction in time the only sole reason for cancelling of contracts by the advertisers we can state that the author's conclusion of increasing time devoted to local and weathers news is flawed.
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| 2019-03-09 | Himanshu0809 | 50 | view |
- nation should require all of its students to study all the same national curiiculum until they enter college 16
- over the past year , our late night news programs has devoted increase time to national news and less time to weather and local news. during this time period, most of the complains received from viewers were concerned with our stations coverage of weather 50
- nation should require all of its students to study all the same national curiiculum until they enter college 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ity are unsatisfied with the coverage. Secondly the auther fails to state whet...
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...atisfied with the coverage. Secondly the auther fails to state whether viewer...
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...tracts with them but he fails to provide a proper premise that whether this is du...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89117647059 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55005193165 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464705882353 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 23.0359550562 243% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.021082999 60.3974514979 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 277.166666667 118.986275619 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.6666666667 23.4991977007 241% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 5.21951772744 281% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.2758426966 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0192148167625 0.243740707755 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0111788114667 0.0831039109588 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0143483916489 0.0758088955206 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0149596404898 0.150359130593 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147790575481 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.9 14.1392134831 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.1 48.8420337079 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 12.1743820225 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.8971910112 454% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 11.2143820225 218% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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