Your English teacher has found a penfriend for you.Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

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Your English teacher has found a penfriend for you.

Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

Submitted by vienmai on Mon, 03/11/2019 - 02:20

Dear John,

My English teacher, Mr Mike, has told me about you. From him, I know that you are his friend and we can become penfriend so I can improve my writing skill. Therefore, I write this letter to break the ice.

My name is Vien. I live in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam. This is the biggest city in the South of my country. So as you can imagine, I have many interesting places here to visit in my free time. First of all, I think coffee shops are my biggest favourite. In fact, my friends and I usually try out a new shop every weekend. We can check their beverage, food, and take selfies. After that, we give our feedback back to the Internet so that people can make comparisons when they want to hang out.
In addition, I also love to clean up my house during my free time. To be honest, my cosy room is full of dirty clothes and trashes after just a week. My wife also helps me out so I find the task more fun and happier.
Well, that is about me till now. How about you, John? Do you have any hobbies and interests? I'm eager to see your reply from you soon.

Best wishes,
Vien Mai.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, My English teacher, Mr Mike, has told me...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... Do you have any hobbies and interests? Im eager to see your reply from you soon. ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, well, as to, i think, in addition, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12093023256 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06825656901 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66976744186 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5881693225 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.6315789474 76.5299724578 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3157894737 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173693933064 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548665746499 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689054752807 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127991413158 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10071462707 0.0580467560999 174% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.6 8.37731958763 43% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.43 8.71597938144 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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