Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you.
Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests
To,
Jack
Sub - Welcome note for becoming new friend.
Dear loved one,
My name is John & i hope u would have got information regarding me from Mrs. Carla who is our English teacher. She has been my favorite teacher from few months as her teachings always inspire me to read & write in regards of social elementary causes.
Usually, i remain busy with my course preparation due to examination which is scheduled next month but during my leisure time i spent my hours in reading novels, watching family movies & writing some articles. you will be glad to know that my previous pen down was published in city magazine which got appreciation from local mayor.
I believe I have said many things related to my hobbies & want to understand your interests & like to know more about you. It would be great if i can get learn something from your liking.
Your faithfully,
John
St. mercy school
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecoming new friend. Dear loved one, My name is John & i hope u would have go...
^^^
Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... Dear loved one, My name is John & i hope u would have got information regar...
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Line 6, column 215, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...hings always inspire me to read & write in regards of social elementary causes. Usual...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n regards of social elementary causes. Usually, i remain busy with my course pr...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ial elementary causes. Usually, i remain busy with my course preparation ...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d next month but during my leisure time i spent my hours in reading novels, watch...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... family movies & writing some articles. you will be glad to know that my previous p...
^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich got appreciation from local mayor. I believe I have said many things relate...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 154, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ow more about you. It would be great if i can get learn something from your likin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83116883117 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52239965113 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.798701298701 0.622605031667 128% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5806764505 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144497886697 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647756705775 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602791319235 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847698449408 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072718578078 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.