An English speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend.
Dear Rosy
I am glad to hear that you are visiting my home town Patiala next week. I know this is the first time you are visiting this place but you do not have to worry about anything at all. I will be glad to put you up for the entire duration of your trip. Now in case that is not fine with you, you can stay in one of the luxury hotels in the city. There are many of them and they all offer facilities such as air-conditioned room, well-equipped bathroom, swimming pool and many more.
Patiala is a big city with lots of tourist attractions. The world’s number one doll museum is here. There are some fabulous dance clubs too. I know you are the kind of person who just loves to dance to the beats of rock music. There is also a wonderful market where you will find all kinds of modern and traditional lifestyle products.
You don’t have to bring warm clothes, as the weather is sunny at this time of the year. Instead pack cotton clothes in light shades. In addition, you must have long sleeve kurtas to get protection from the sunlight.
Do inform me the exact date and time of your arrival so that I can receive you at the airport. See you soon.
Take care
Preeti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ot have to worry about anything at all. I will be glad to put you up for the enti...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ther is sunny at this time of the year. Instead pack cotton clothes in light shades. In...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'sleeved'.
Suggestion: sleeved
...shades. In addition, you must have long sleeve kurtas to get protection from the sunli...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, as to, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35714285714 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30100909541 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8992306141 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0418783792293 0.216113520407 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0139810167495 0.0766984524023 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322839163511 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0300244873928 0.12726935374 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323598262783 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.